Wednesday, April 25, 2007


THEN AND NOW


This girl lived in England in about 1905. The girl were about ten years old. She looked very poor and she wore old clothes. She didn’t look very happy. She toast a bread in the chimney. She didn’t win a money. Her money handed over to parents. She started to work at 8 years old.

This boy lived in England in about 1996. The boy were about 12 years old. He looked rich and he wore new clothes. He looked very happy. He studied in the school. He played at the game boy colour and another games. He started to work about twenty three years old.

Jessica, 13 years.

This girl was born in 1923. Her name is Julia. She was about 13 years old. She worked of servant of the rich families. The rich woman hit her and almost didn’t pay to girl. She didn’t have parents, didn’t have brothers or sister. She was alone. Julia wore an old and dirty dress. She wore a scarf to the head, too.


This boy was born in 1994. His name is Joan. He is a boy nice and with very toys. He go to school. Joan has very friends because now everybody have a toys and machine. He don’t work of sevant, miners... He wear a blue shirt.


Paola, 13 years.


Her name is Emily. She’s got a 11 years old. She was born Italy. And she lives in Mexic. She didn’t go to school. She didn’t rich. She hated worked. She liked play with her friends. She couln’t wore things rich for that she poor. She worked in the baker. With the family.


His name is John. He’s got a 14 years old. He go to school. John doesn’t like to go to school. He likes play the Gameboy and football with his friends. He loves Adriana. John is very rich, and he lives in very big house with garden and swimming pool.


Nuria, 13 years.


This girl was baker. She didn't wear shoes. She looked poor. She worn hat. She was about eleven years old. She didn't look very happy. She wore a break dress. She was at the high temperature. She looked work very hard. She looked burn with the fire. She worked alone. She was surrouding from dustman. She hadn't any privileges.


He lives in England in about 1989. He is about twelve years old. He is a student. He is very happy. He cant play with a game boy. He wears clean clothes. He never works. He doesn't is ill. He is very clean. He has very clothes and shoes. He has very toys. He goes to school. He eats the sweets. He never suffers.

Hasnae, 13 years.


This photo is very ancient. One sees a woman with an old and torn (broken) garment if shoes and with the hair gathered by a handkerchief (scarf) of stripes. The this woman doing bread in a big enough oven, the fire this ignition. To the bottom (fund) of the photo one sees a wagon that goes for a route of wood.


This photo is not very old. One sees a child playing the Game Boy that is of color white. The child has the long hair and of brown color. It (he, she) takes a shirt of blue color with a drawing in the left side. Of bottom (fund) not sigh anything.


Dani, 13 years.


She is a girl. She live in england about 1916. She is twelve years old abd she is breaker. She isn`t a rich. She is very poor and they wore old clotches. She hadn’t got shoes were. She hadn’t got a money. She can’t play. She isn’t very friends. She has brother. She isn’t g oto school by the money and she has to work.

He is a boy. He is live in england about 1976 . He is thirty years old. He is very student and he has very toys. He is a rich. He is wearing a blue t-shirt and black jeans. He isn’t wearing a dress. He is play the console. He is very play and he has very friends.


Maria, 14 years.


In the picture is she a baker. These children was a baker. She is a baker behind there was a mountain. They were a poor. Street is a very bad. She is clothes a dress a very bad. She is very bad. She wasn´t a very happy.


In the picture is he . He is play a plastation. He is a Game boy. He is clothes a T-shirt blue . He is a hair a brown with and long hair. He is a present. He is a very happy.

Jordan, 13 years.


4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hello Jessica.
The girl were about ten years old.
There is a error.
The girl WAS about ten years old, because was es posa en: I, He, She, It.


Paola

Anonymous said...

Hello Nuria.
She was born Italy.
There is a error.
She was born IN Italy.
Si nó poses el IN es com si dius:

Ella va nèixer Itàlia.

Anonymous said...

Hello Nuria.
I'am Paola, another time.

She couln’t wore things rich for that she poor.

There is a error.

She couldn't. Faltava la D.
I think that is wear no wore, becouse is in negative.

Anonymous said...

Hello Dani.
The this woman doing bread in a big enough oven

There is a error.

En la frase posa:
L'aquesta dona...
Has de treure the o this.

best wishes, your friend Paola.